However, where is it going? I’ve proven – at least I think I have – that I can write
about golf and write about it well.
I don’t like the idea of abandoning what I’ve done so far, because I’m
proud of it. But I don’t like the
idea of writing the same kind of blog posts and Twitter comments over and over
again with no clear intent behind them.
So what I’m proposing is centering my blog on a
concept. It will still be about
golf. But I think it will be more
focused, funny, and maybe even full of a grain of truth. I want to spend my time now picking
apart the nonsense of the game.
I’ve done a little of that in the elevator pitches this week and in
other pieces before. But I want
that to be my main topic of discussion going forward.
To that end, I’m beginning this minor shift in my online
presence by starting my campaign to allow pro players to wear shorts on the
golf course. This trivial rule is
something that I know the players want – I’ve heard interviews in which they’ve
asked for it. But no one is pushing
for this change because no one cares.
Rightfully so, but as an outsider to the game and as someone who would
like to see the game catch up to our century – or at least the last one – I
think this campaign is an excellent place to start.
- Otto
Everyone needs a cause. It looks like you have found yours.
ReplyDeleteI think overall that you have developed your voice. You attack your subject matter with aplomb and make golf accessible, which is no easy task.
If I have one criticism, it is mechanics. Continue to purge yourself of extraneous words and keep sentences lean. This will help your posts to have a better flow and rhythm. Your message and humor deserves focus.
Hi Otto,
ReplyDeleteI'm happy to learn you are getting serious about being funny. I've enjoyed your irreverent take on golf. As Zinsser points out in his chapter on humor, "if you're writing about humor, almost everything you do is serious." At times, what has been absent in your humor is this seriousness of purpose. Though you are quick to make me laugh, I'm not certain of your point of view. I'm not saying we need to be in agreement, just that there isn't much reason to keep reading if it's just slap stick. Do you love golf, or do you hate it? Why? You've put your finger on it. There's no purpose in writing the same kinds of blog and Twitter posts over and over again.
Your voice reminds me of George Carlin. He hated golf. Hated it with a passion, yet he still managed to be funny when speaking about it. Personally, I love golf, and couldn't disagree more with Carlin. I suppose, however, if you're going to write about golf, loving it would be easier. That's why I find Robin Williams' take on golf so much funnier (he doesn't hate the subject he's lampooning). Both comedians are pointing out obvious flaws in the logic of golf, and they both arrive at similar results in terms of humor.
You've probably seen these clips, but I've included them here as examples. They're awfully fun, too.
George Carlin on Golf http://youtu.be/Z4w7H48tBS8
Robin Williams on golf http://youtu.be/htqS-ObKKp4
Cheers!
All The Best,
E.B.